Coffee & Change

Somewhere off the highway

In those darkest hours

Before the dawn

To the Diner’s light

She was drawn

 

Her heart tattered

Her body weary

Her soul torn

 

“Just a coffee, please”

‘You want cream and sugar hun?’ Called the waitress, whose soles were worn.

“Yes ma’am, extra if you would please”  she said. Pulling a notebook from her pack.

 

She sat for hours, pen in her hand

Coffee rings on her paper

Change, in the air

 

 

2 thoughts on “Coffee & Change

  1. This piece is full. The fullness lives in the last line, launching us into the possibilities of the moments living in that page.

    Each of us poet-types have been her once or twice. Thank you for sharing her with us.

  2. You have a way Amanda of transporting readers with few words to experience a moment by your speakers side.

    For a moment I sat under fluorescent lights, heard tired feet walk to and from a kitchen, smelled fresh and old coffee alike.

    I love the use of discourse in this pieces it is such a clear visual image and while heavy with a weariness that feels tangible, it is also laced with possibility and hopefulness.

    Beautiful Poem.

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    Darren Syme Coremans (@dscoremans)

    https://thepoetrymarathon.com/blog/author/dscoremans/

    #FoDiByLi

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