Prompt Twenty-Two – Visual Prompt – Silencio
Contrast
The Hush hits you when you walk in through the door
after a month in India. Or Thailand. Or Spain.
It cradles the racing, travel weary, jet lagged pain.
You can hear the neighbour’s grass being cut.
Two doors down. Through double glazed windows.
You can even hear your own heart beat
And the buzz in your ears.
But what of the buzz you left behind?
Cackling kids, constant doorbells, honking cars.
Constant chitter chatter and yelps of laughter
Merging with the yelps of stray dogs.
You cant hear the birds there, so they caw louder
To be heard. Everyone needs to be heard.
And here, its Silencio.
I love the beautiful imagery here, the occasional rhyming couplet and rhyme scheme. I love the contrast the you build up throughout the poem between your travels esp with India and even the need to be heard in contrast to the current Silencio. Beautiful Anjana!!!
This is beautifully written…”To be heard. Everyone needs to be heard.”
“And here, its Silencio.”
Loved these lines!!