Within my garden
grow Palms
of every kind
Wizened and old
twisted by time
The stoney path
is lined complete
with moss from
Irish moor and land
Above my head
hang hibiscus’s lush
every color on
every strand
A bench made of
century old cedar
so one can sit
instead of stand
Lovely portrait of your garden. A little tweak to make your first verse 4 lines long & line 4 end with the *and rhyme will tighten it even more 🙃
Thank you. The line count was a reform by the site I guess. I have corrected that and will work on your second suggestion. Thank you!! 😊
My favorite lines could also be applied to trees. (I’m a tree lover)! “ Wizened and old/
twisted by time” great way of expressing the elements of a well loved garden.
Thank you so much! ☺️
Thank you. The line count was a reform by the site I guess. I have corrected that and will work on your second suggestion. Thank you!! 😊