Hour 11 – Etheria Redux (image prompt)

When I turned 20 I received

My most powerful feeling

A warm yellow of joy and spring

From which I get no break.

You’d think me glad,

and far from mad,

But of course! I haven’t any choice.

The darkened sky can’t make me cry

But gives me plenty of work.

Some not so “lucky” need my joy

To get through their day.

Flowers in bloom

Distilling a mood in time

Before I send it it their way.

But I ask you, my dear,

If all you feel is joy

how can your head be clear?

My feeling are dim, and I

I’m limited to acting

Upon the feeling’s whim.

The solution lies in a secret

The middling colors won’t ever know

nor will the children who feel for free

Oh! There’s the door,

a knock awaiting me!

At last, hooray, it has arrived.

My case of anxiet-tea.

One thought on “Hour 11 – Etheria Redux (image prompt)

  1. This is a beautiful piece of poetry. It is so quietly introspective and contemplates a deeply symbiotic nature of most relationships, both internal and external.

    These Lines:

    ”My feeling are dim, and I
    I’m limited to acting
    Upon the feeling’s whim.”

    These lines really speak to me, the process of acting, beyond emotional desire or capacity action where feeling is just too much. This is a profound poem that is deeper than the surface it shows.

    DSC

    Darren Syme Coremans (@dscoremans)

    https://thepoetrymarathon.com/blog/author/dscoremans/

    #FoDiByLi

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