in the silence of my mornings
pen in hand
i write the dust from my heart
to make my world whole and filled with love
again
after the ugliness of the unseen
has left its mark on my heart.
those early words on the tip of my pen
frees the pain
and heals the wounds too small to see.
r. l. elke
Hello lovely! This is beautiful, and so true. Our words released suture the minuscule wounds.
Thank you so much, dearest! So lovely to see you here again!
How delicately precise and moving. The beauty of this poem is in its minuscule detail and in the work that you undertake to ‘write the dust from [your] heart’ and make your world beautiful again. Stunning work.
Thank you so much! I appreciate that.
I love this. All of it, but especially:
“i write the dust from my heart
to make my world whole and filled with love
again”
thank you <3
That last line! Beautiful!
thank you
This is beautiful Ramona. You have such a beautiful way with words, imagery and phrasing…”write the dust from my heart…” My heart, this is lovely! “Those early words on the tip of my pen frees the heart again…”. This is so wonderful and heart opening…a pleasure to read! Thank you!
Beautiful and well written
Especially love the line
“to make my world whole and filled with love
again
after the ugliness of the unseen
has left its mark on my heart.”
I appreciate the ending too, it is hopeful.
I know others have pointed this out already, but wow that line ‘i write the dust from my heart’ is amazing!! Really love this!
I am still loving this poem as I am about to read some of your others….I write the dust from my heart. This is such a wonderful line! Well done!
I love This poem. Writing is healing for me too. Great poem