a storm of feelings
but we’ll still win
how do i make it through from here
you might ask
and answer like i do
how is it so that i seem to think i know
but don’t do
and how may i still have more questions?
with your ability and everlasting will to answer,
i surrender
I love the imagery in this poem, “we win.”
A storm of feelings is a wonderful image. The flow of the poem is fantastic and I love the conflict through culminating in “I surrender.” Great work!
thank you so so much!!!