Waking in the morning
Speaking me softly
Kisses by the winds of exchanges
Profound lines leading me to the cloud today
Heartwarming blue enveloping clouds
Seeing me making me wonders so immensely
Bewildered as always
Enchanting tales of new hope
New desires envelope as the blue clouds
Always hopeful and full of life echoing
6:06 PM PST 14/08/2016
© ROY MARK AZANZA CORRALES
I enjoyed reading this poem and was caught up in much of the imagery-beautiful! I love alliteration and you used it well e.g, “speaking me softly. I loved the tone of the poem…light and soft like the language that you used.
My only comment is one line in the poem- Kisses by the winds of exchanges…did you mean wind of change…exchanges is good but this line is hard to read…too many syllables and exchanges is a harder word…just my thoughts…all the other words are so soft…