instructions for spiritual living
Walking hand in hand
the sky and land
become one
Universe sees itself
Through
your eyes.
You are
the composer
Maker of your
own reality,
Your destiny
Work in tune
And Harmony
with nature
Looking down
at the path
We get indications
of obstacles
and objects that you
shouldn’t step on
Not to dismiss
the path to
awakening
believing that
ego-self is
all there is
🥰🌟🙏 Love!
“Universe sees itself
Through
your eyes.”
A wonderful opening statement
Your modus operandi seems to be short line poems (not that there’s anything wrong with that) … although short lines do give a sense of pace, of rushing … the content of this poem hints that maybe playing with longer lines & stronger enjambments will help add a calming influence to the poem which mirrors the theme
Just a thought
Hope this helps
The mind creates reality. Brilliant!